Thursday, October 2, 2008

what an image...is a picture worth a thousand words?

Rich is fantastic in this poem. She is almost deceptively sutle in her message thus making it easy for the reader to be drawn in. As if she is an actual diver of the seas. In this poem the personal imagery is incredible. every available personal pronoun is used in this pronoun and for various purposes. " i put on", "my flippers", "we know", "you breathe differently", "we dive...i am he: i am she". these are just a few.
these instances really reinforce Rich's sense of being that i believe metamorphosis throughout the poem. After learning that she is a staunch feminist, these identity issues are given much greater significance.
the imagery in this poem is very realist. no embellishment is found here.
"threadbare beauty"
even when addressing mermaids and mermen, her approach remains very realist. 
some other interesting imagery that she uses is found in her utilities for the "dive".  her book of myths, her knife, her camera, and even her flippers carry symbolic imagery.  in my interpretation of her poem, the overarching imagery of the sea as being society, a huge, churning vastness, and the wreck as her life at the hands of this brutal society is evident.  The dive is her endeavour to salvage herself before its too late.  the camera is great imagery representing her past memories and her effort to document the "rebuild "about to occur.  the knife shows that she isn't playing. she is ready to do work and cut away all those undesirable things in her old self.  the book of myths stands for beliefs that she had always held on to as something that helped to define her.  she has brought this with her so that she can change it as well. and she does for at the end of the poem. the book has transformed in its use to her, the old one in which "our names shall never appear".  she has found her identity in something else now.  the flippers are great imagery, in their bulky akwardness, for the things in herself that she must overcome as she dives into the blackness.

overall this poem and its powerful imagery paint a picture of someone embarking upon an endeavor, the outcome of which is unknown.  this bravery combined with some sense of desperate urgency, is what makes the poem stand out in my mind as an extraordinary piece of writing which i thoroughly enjoyed reading.

Wednesday, October 1, 2008

ttyl...my bff  8 a bug!!!   omg wtf!!

you have just witnessed above not a kindergarten alphabet class but the communication of young adults in this day and age.  in the modern technological era of the cell phone--no the iphone, texting instant messaging, and internet it seems that personal communication is becoming antiquated and these aforementioned substitutes are taking its place.  this is a shame. and thats why i have titled this blog as i have.
almost all important happenings throughout the span of human life include communication. (at least the parts that have to do with the people around us, which is usually a pretty big chunk)
communicating well to others is a skill that is  definitely lacking more and more among young people today.  this is tragic.  first, thanks to alexander graham bell it became, "well ill call instead of going over to jimmies to ask him this question". Now, it has further evolved to "ill just text jimmy instead of calling him."  As communication becomes more and more impersonal, more problems arise and relationships are weakened.  i cant name the huge number of times ive become distraught over a misunderstood text message. and the whole situation would have been avoided if only the person had called me.  texting has become a cop out and a thing of convenience.  that is why someone actually showing up to ask in person shows an authentic amount of interest.  
idk- see there i go...haha
 anyway, i just wish people would learn to communicate.  its the backbone to every relationship that you will ever have, and it is respected by others.  i would argue that it is necessary for success.  just cus everyone else takes the easy road doesnt mean that you have to as well.
 those are just a few thoughts but its all for now.
peace